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Man, I have a couple scenes of my Steve/Loki finished, but something feels wrong. I keep re-reading them and I feel uneasy, like I've fucked something up, but I can't figure out what it is. It's like my gut is telling me I broke the plot somehow, or someone's voice is really off, or I have a massive continuity problem. Which I shouldn't! I just don't know what's off or how to fix it. *cries* It's just supposed to be a humorous/sweet fic, not something with real plot! Ugh. If anyone would be willing to read through it for me and give me their opinion on what's off, I'd be seriously grateful.

*sigh* Anyway, to console myself, have some pics, you guys.


( Holy crap, this is a shitload of pics... )